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Havoc
MERCHANT HOUSE
Joined: 17 Mar 2007
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Location: Wandering the Wastelands
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Hokay, so, I joined a few days ago, yet it didn't let me log in. But I'm here now!
I myself am a prolific writer, preferring fantasy-style stuff. I'm always looking for new stuff to read, so if you have a piece you want looked at, don't hesitate to ask me!
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QueenFlamewing
37- House d' Chath Alti'ui
Joined: 17 Mar 2007
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Location: Slinking around in the Underdark
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Vendui Havoc. Well, thanks to Silverspirit...there's a long piece in the Writer's Corner that she & I collaborated on, actually 1/2 the story,(I didn't mean to make it soooo long  lol) if ya want to take a peeksy. 
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Deathless_Lord
35- House L' Venorik Ussen
Joined: 10 Mar 2007
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Location: Tir Tairngire
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Hello Havoc. Jolly good to see you. Did you chain up the Dogs of War before you left the House today?
Hmm... well since you're interested (or are polite enough to pretend.  ) I've got a couple stories sprinkled through my da site (which is here at the apropreately named link- http://deathlesslord.deviantart.com/ -gee what a surprise) But peruse at your leisure- that goes for the rest of You Lot too. I'm not he best writer out there- I do in fact suck- but hey! I'mm honest.
(...Annnnd... I'm rambling now. I shouldn't have eaten all those gummibears. Pay no attention to that albino in the corner...)
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Havoc
MERCHANT HOUSE
Joined: 17 Mar 2007
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Location: Wandering the Wastelands
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| Posted: Wed Mar 21, 2007 11:34 am Post subject: |
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| Hello Havoc. Jolly good to see you. Did you chain up the Dogs of War before you left the House today? |
Nah, I don't have dogs of war. I got nasty things called Pravagen Pariahs!  And they usually have to be chained-up to begin with...
Anyway, to both of you, I will take a look and share my thoughts. However, is there anything specific you'd like me to take a look at? Plot? Character development? Setting? You get the idea. If not, I'll just look through and do a grammar check, so to speak, and share my thoughts here and there.
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PaleDrow
34- House Riknueth Vharc, Arch Web Mage
Joined: 07 Mar 2007
Posts: 73
Location: Somewhere North of Undrek Thoz
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| Posted: Wed Mar 21, 2007 6:27 pm Post subject: |
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| Welcome Havoc! I've been out for a day and just got nack so haven't had a chance to say hello
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Deathless_Lord
35- House L' Venorik Ussen
Joined: 10 Mar 2007
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Location: Tir Tairngire
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::Grins:: nah. Don't have to read anything ifin ya dont feel like. It's not like I'm gonna have C'liss & Brenn there come over to your house and remove your liver & sell it grey-market to China if you don't.
Grammar & ilk I can usually catch-particularly since none of my checkchecks will acept words like "harbour/parlour/arbelast... I know i'm weak on Plot, my characters tend to be interchangeable and my setting.. is usually okay description wise. But if you wanna make suestions feel free. (I'm making this up as I go you see.)
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Havoc
MERCHANT HOUSE
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Location: Wandering the Wastelands
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| Posted: Wed Mar 21, 2007 7:12 pm Post subject: |
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Cool-cool.
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| It's not like I'm gonna have C'liss & Brenn there come over to your house and remove your liver & sell it grey-market to China if you don't. |
Lol. Very funny.
Anyway, I'll have a look at the characters, plot and setting. And yes, I can see you're making stuff up as you go, which is fine, because you're a writer.
Now, is there a specific piece you want looked at?
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Spiritsilver
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Location: Northwest Louisiana
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hiya havoc... not so much a writer i likey pictures more... lol... but as ya saw in the other forum i write and help write thingys... lol... words dont come to me as gracefully as they do some...  .... ehh oh well... maybe one day ill finish up the story of Milarana that i started a wee bit ago... just maybe...lol...
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QueenFlamewing
37- House d' Chath Alti'ui
Joined: 17 Mar 2007
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Location: Slinking around in the Underdark
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| Posted: Wed Mar 21, 2007 8:36 pm Post subject: |
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| Spiritsilver wrote: |
| hiya havoc... not so much a writer i likey pictures more... lol... but as ya saw in the other forum i write and help write thingys... lol... words dont come to me as gracefully as they do some... .... ehh oh well... maybe one day ill finish up the story of Milarana that i started a wee bit ago... just maybe...lol... |
Now don't you be lying like that. Sure you gravitate more towards pictorial expression, but you do have the gift of a writer ( And now I can :nudge: you about finishing up a story. *running before she tosses out my 13 year unfinished novel at me*
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DrowKat
3- House Si'mari Meten, High Priestess
Joined: 07 Mar 2007
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Location: Ni'ya, Tzephi or California, USA
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Hey buddy! ^_^ Good to see you are spreading more writing love.
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Spiritsilver
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*running before she tosses out my 13 year unfinished novel at me* |
you better run dang it... *chunks the Heir of Death at her*... hee hee...
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Havoc
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Joined: 17 Mar 2007
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Location: Wandering the Wastelands
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| Posted: Wed Mar 21, 2007 9:29 pm Post subject: |
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| Hey buddy! ^_^ Good to see you are spreading more writing love. |
Damn straight! I'm also hoping to have some people read some of my stuff while I'm at it! Speaking of which, Kat, we should put links up to Legacy up here!
As for you Spiritsilver, it looks like you've got something, but I'm not sure what to make of it yet. I have to finish reading it, but it looks pretty good to me.
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Deathless_Lord
35- House L' Venorik Ussen
Joined: 10 Mar 2007
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Location: Tir Tairngire
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| Posted: Wed Mar 21, 2007 9:42 pm Post subject: |
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| is there a specific piece you want looked at? |
No not really. The new stuff is in the main gallery- I write really slowly- and the older stuff is in the scraps. (Because while I like 'em I can/have done better since andI know if I tweak them I'll vex myself and they'll end up as pure drivel. That and I need to stash 'em someplace cause I dont have hardcopy and ew's been hassling me about changing the old ones lately. >_< stoopid elfwood.)
I've got at least a half dozen more wips sitting in bits right now on at least three computers. Which doesnt help & is vexing me. I can see the words- it plays out beautifully in my head like a movie- the background the clothes, each snippet of dialogue... then goes PLOOBADOOF! the moment I sit down at he keboard.
And I really should stop rantin' on this thing. ::Pokes it:: Or you all is gonna think me even stranger then I actually am! XD
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Havoc
MERCHANT HOUSE
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| Posted: Wed Mar 21, 2007 10:10 pm Post subject: |
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Alright then. I'll take a look at one-or-two pieces of lit.
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Just like me! Only it doesn't vanish when I get to the keyboard.
I'll PM you some tips or something later if you're looking to write more.
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Deathless_Lord
35- House L' Venorik Ussen
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Yip away. I'll read 'm. Might not reply but I'll always read 'em.
How about this one: 2 am. half asleep and an entire scene plays out dream sequence wise. you wake up, scurry for pen & paper then stare blankly at it, having completely forgotten what you were going to write about in the few short minutes you were awake. You ever get that one?
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